Alexander Bilstien

I know this is out of order so please forgive me 

I had heard about things happening in my house from time to time from my mom, sister's, and my nan.


As I hadn't had anything happen to me yet I didn't put much stock into what they was telling me. Until I had my first experience which was funny enough on a halloween night.


Sadly I cant remember how long ago that was but I remember what I was doing.  That  year me and a close friend of mine decided to work together on minecraft and build a 1/1 scale model of a transformer that me and him both like called tidal wave.


And on this halloween night we had finished our build and decided to just relax and enjoy what we had made by putting our character in a position, where we could see the whole thing and talk about our project and a few things we had coming up.


Now what you need to know is that in mine and my brothers room we have this cupboard that has the boiler, bath towels, and bed sheets stored inside .


So there is no way something or someone could fit in there but on this night I heard the noise that a handle makes when you go to open the door.


And as I turned my had I watched the handle move down on its own and watched as the door opened and saw a clawed hand let go off the handle and go back into the cupboard.


I remember being covered in goosebumps and feeling the hairs on my arms standing up which is what is happening right now as I type this up.


My friend ended up shouting my name down the microphone to me to get my attention and I just told him what happened and he said you have to leave you're room,


Now he's been over and knows that I have to walk past this cupboard to leave my room, and I honestly couldn't bring my self to leave because in my mind if this thing could open a door and had claws on its hand then what would it do to me if I tried to leave?


The only thing I could do was text my brother to come to my room get me to which he did as he knows that it would take a lot to scare me enough to make me freeze on the spot.


Once he came up I felt safe enough to try and leave so I shut the cupboard door and walked out the room behind my brother to head down stairs.


Now what you must know is that when you come out of my room you have to go right up the landing and right again to get to the stairs.


Well as I turned to go down stairs I first looked in the direction of my room and I saw that same hand come out of my room and wrap around the section of the wall that makes up the door way to my room.


And I just flew down the stairs nearly knocking my brother off the bottem step only to have him use a few choice words at me.

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danieluzumki
Since you saw it in the night (I think), maybe during the day you can remove the cupboard and burn it and maybe it will be gone.
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nox_lumen

I know this is out of order so please forgive me 

I had heard about things happening in my house from time to time from my mom, sister's, and my nan.


As I hadn't had anything happen to me yet. I didn't put much stock into what they were telling me. Until I had my first experience which was funny enough on a Halloween night. Sadly, I can't remember how long ago that was but I remember what I was doing.  That  year me and a close friend of mine decided to work together on Minecraft and build a 1/1 scale model of a transformer that me and him both like called tidal wave. On this Halloween night we had finished our build and decided to just relax and enjoy what we had made by putting our character in a position. We could see the whole thing and talk about our project and a few things we had coming up.


Now what you need to know is that in mine and my brothers room we have this cupboard that has the boiler, bath towels, and bed sheets stored inside. There is no way something or someone could fit in there, but on this night I heard the noise that a handle makes when you go to open the door. I turned my head I watched the handle move down on its own and watched as the door opened. I saw a clawed hand let go off the handle and go back into the cupboard. I remember being covered in goosebumps and feeling the hairs on my arms standing up which is what is happening right now as I type this up.


My friend ended up shouting my name down the microphone to me to get my attention. I just told him what happened and he said "You have to leave you're room!"


Now he's been over and knows that I have to walk past this cupboard to leave my room, and I honestly couldn't bring my self to leave. In my mind if this thing could open a door and had claws on its hand.  Then what would it do to me if I tried to leave? The only thing I could do was text my brother to come to my room get me. Which he did as he knows that it would take a lot to scare me enough to make me freeze on the spot.


Once he came up I felt safe enough to try and leave so I shut the cupboard door and walked out the room behind my brother to head down stairs. When you come out of my room you have to go right up the landing and right again to get to the stairs. Well, as I turned to go down stairs I first looked in the direction of my room. I saw that same hand come out of my room and wrap around the section of the wall that makes up the doorway to my room.


I just flew down the stairs nearly knocking my brother off the bottom step only to have him use a few choice words at me.



Your order of events is pretty good, but you had some run on sentences. I tried to clean those up a bit, and grouped things into paragraphs.
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